i love the way you write these tropes and as usual, this has stolen my breath completely with its awesomeness Beauuuuuuuuuuuutiful (and the collab seems to have gone really smoothly) this groundhog day kinda concept was really really successfully utitlized I loved it when sehun just picked up small details along the way, learning more about himself and the way Chanyeol reacted to him. My favorite parts are almost always when a character (that's not the one with the pov) is shown having those feelings. "But Chanyeol has always been an open book, so somehow Sehun must have been reading the wrong pages.
Now though, when he looks up to meet Chanyeol’s eyes, he can recognize a little of the longing in Chanyeol’s face, lurking at the corners of his mouth and in the set of his eyebrows, and he realizes it has always been there." And how Chanyeol shivers when Sehun accidentally touches him? And the climax? -SPAZZES AND TWITCHES FROM MY FEELS-
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Date: 2012-12-01 04:25 am (UTC)and as usual, this has stolen my breath completely with its awesomeness
Beauuuuuuuuuuuutiful
(and the collab seems to have gone really smoothly)
this groundhog day kinda concept was really really successfully utitlized
I loved it when sehun just picked up small details along the way, learning more about himself and the way Chanyeol reacted to him. My favorite parts are almost always when a character (that's not the one with the pov) is shown having those feelings.
"But Chanyeol has always been an open book, so somehow Sehun must have been reading the wrong pages.
Now though, when he looks up to meet Chanyeol’s eyes, he can recognize a little of the longing in Chanyeol’s face, lurking at the corners of his mouth and in the set of his eyebrows, and he realizes it has always been there."
And how Chanyeol shivers when Sehun accidentally touches him?
And the climax?
-SPAZZES AND TWITCHES FROM MY FEELS-