i honestly thought twice before i read this fic. no, it wasnt cos i was afraid your fic won't amaze me (that, is smth i AM sure of btw) but i's cause of i had doubts about the pairing itself n also the direction of this fic (R rating is reserved for gri lmao)
But i read anyway, and damn. thus is heavy. not 'depressive or sad emo' kind of heavy, but the words have so much weight in them that i feel u gave away so much details in only 2k. yeah so i feel like finally i can read a fic that rly portrays Dae's inner thinking n character, not just a shallow stereotype that i mostly found in a dae centric fic. thank you for that, rly. n thank you for not taking his religiousness as something like a joke. i adore your take on his religion, so interesting!
the handjob!! lol i was kinda shocked, even if it's exoected but damn the dialogue n the action itself, idk how u can turn something sexual into something insightful maia lol im lost at words.
and your jiyong. while you can play a lot w/ri's character i noticed that u have a firm grip with jiyong's character in ur fics, n i love the cinsistency.. it makes me think that this fic happens simultaneously w your other fics (gri),lol idk i hope u get what i mean hahahs
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Date: 2012-10-30 08:09 pm (UTC)But i read anyway, and damn. thus is heavy. not 'depressive or sad emo' kind of heavy, but the words have so much weight in them that i feel u gave away so much details in only 2k. yeah so i feel like finally i can read a fic that rly portrays Dae's inner thinking n character, not just a shallow stereotype that i mostly found in a dae centric fic. thank you for that, rly. n thank you for not taking his religiousness as something like a joke. i adore your take on his religion, so interesting!
the handjob!! lol i was kinda shocked, even if it's exoected but damn the dialogue n the action itself, idk how u can turn something sexual into something insightful maia lol im lost at words.
and your jiyong. while you can play a lot w/ri's character i noticed that u have a firm grip with jiyong's character in ur fics, n i love the cinsistency.. it makes me think that this fic happens simultaneously w your other fics (gri),lol idk i hope u get what i mean hahahs
anyway ♥. thank u for this great peace...
AND GIMME SOME GRI IM DYING ALREADY HOW COULD YOU