OH MY GOD MAIA I'M GOING TO HUNT YOU DOWN I LOVE YOU SO MUCH you always write the most beautiful things ;; ok so.... character dynamic. lets start with the friendships of the story (i apologize in advance for how ginormous this comment is going to be) yixing has very different relationships with each of his friends, which is a very realistic and amusing part of this MASTERPIECE. kris is just as embarrassing and self-important as we all know he is irl, and how earnestly he tries to tie everyone together into a peaceful group of friends is kind of pitiful and hilarious at the same time. he's kind of the push that yixing needs and also that big brother figure that helps him get the through the most confusing of times. luhan is just. luhan. cheeky bastard. how he and yixing are equally as evil to kris was one of my favorite parts of the friendship circle you constructed here (also MINSEOK. YOU ARE SO WHIPPED). jongdae is the sassiest mofo i can't even. he seems completely useless to yixing and then he jumps in with good advice and support at the last minute ;; <3 the slow build up of feelings and emotion between jongin and yixing was very realistic, and traveling that slow journey of yixing realizing hey, i'm kind of extremely in love with this person was so interesting. i learned a shit ton about photography while reading this i want to take a class lol. but tying photography in with the desire to be with someone and to always see that someone was very clever, and the way you wrote it was intricate and unique. UGH. stop being amazing please. another thing i really loved about the story was the way everything built up tiny piece by tiny piece and then kind of exploded into this mess of restrained desires and masked emotions at the end. that's kinda how love/confessions works, isn't it? keeping everything inside until you can't take it anymore and blow up. THE END. WITH THE COLOR PHOTO AND THE SLEEPING JONGIN AND HE STILL HASN'T FOUND THE PERFECT PHOTOGRAPH BUT HE HAS FOREVER TO SEARCH FOR IT AND OMFG MAIA I CAN'T you did a fantastic job and i seriously admire you so much get over here let me love you bby <33333
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Date: 2012-09-19 02:27 am (UTC)you always write the most beautiful things ;;
ok so.... character dynamic. lets start with the friendships of the story (i apologize in advance for how ginormous this comment is going to be)
yixing has very different relationships with each of his friends, which is a very realistic and amusing part of this MASTERPIECE. kris is just as embarrassing and self-important as we all know he is irl, and how earnestly he tries to tie everyone together into a peaceful group of friends is kind of pitiful and hilarious at the same time. he's kind of the push that yixing needs and also that big brother figure that helps him get the through the most confusing of times. luhan is just. luhan. cheeky bastard. how he and yixing are equally as evil to kris was one of my favorite parts of the friendship circle you constructed here (also MINSEOK. YOU ARE SO WHIPPED). jongdae is the sassiest mofo i can't even. he seems completely useless to yixing and then he jumps in with good advice and support at the last minute ;; <3
the slow build up of feelings and emotion between jongin and yixing was very realistic, and traveling that slow journey of yixing realizing
hey, i'm kind of extremely in love with this personwas so interesting.i learned a shit ton about photography while reading this i want to take a class lol. but tying photography in with the desire to be with someone and to always see that someone was very clever, and the way you wrote it was intricate and unique. UGH. stop being amazing please.
another thing i really loved about the story was the way everything built up tiny piece by tiny piece and then kind of exploded into this mess of restrained desires and masked emotions at the end. that's kinda how love/confessions works, isn't it? keeping everything inside until you can't take it anymore and blow up.
THE END. WITH THE COLOR PHOTO AND THE SLEEPING JONGIN AND HE STILL HASN'T FOUND THE PERFECT PHOTOGRAPH BUT HE HAS FOREVER TO SEARCH FOR IT AND OMFG MAIA I CAN'T
you did a fantastic job and i seriously admire you so much get over here let me love you bby <33333