OMG NO LOL i accidentally pressed delete i think how do you lj cries
anyway hi lol. this is actually like my sixth time reading this because wow. this was so, so gorgeous tbh. ;; i loved the whole "tao is a sunflower because kris is the sun" thing going on because omg it's so true in rl too tao totally worships kris!! and the time skipping as in the back's and the forward's idk they just made the story even better and you even incorporated kris' tATTOO bless you ugh my taoris heart ;a; and idk i just really love your writing style. your descriptions are so pretty and ugh, the line(s) that really hit me in the heart was If a tree falls in a forest, and no one is around to hear it, does it make a sound?
If Zitao cries, alone, head between his knees and arms wrapped around himself to keep from shaking, maybe Zitao isn’t really crying.
Seconds, minutes, hours. That’s how long Zitao does not cry. lkajdflkjLK;DFJDKFD JUST SHOOT ME INSTEAD UGH I HAD LEGIT TEARS IN MY EYES WHY ;; and when kris got shot by his sTUPID UNCLE I almost flipped a table lbr. i would quote more but i'd probably end up quoting the whole story bc perfect
also i loved how like tao and kris were like each other's pillars of support and ugh idk it was so sweet like kris kind of saved tao first by seeing him and then tao saved kris and how kris just makes tao feel so real and un-invisible and dkjfghdf. AND THAT RED BALL OMG UGH. just. this was so perfect. :( ♥
wow this is a really dumb and long comment i'm sORRY ;a;
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Date: 2012-10-11 01:24 pm (UTC)anyway hi lol. this is actually like my sixth time reading this because wow. this was so, so gorgeous tbh. ;; i loved the whole "tao is a sunflower because kris is the sun" thing going on because omg it's so true in rl too tao totally worships kris!! and the time skipping as in the back's and the forward's idk they just made the story even better and you even incorporated kris' tATTOO bless you ugh my taoris heart ;a;
and idk i just really love your writing style. your descriptions are so pretty and ugh, the line(s) that really hit me in the heart was
If a tree falls in a forest, and no one is around to hear it, does it make a sound?
If Zitao cries, alone, head between his knees and arms wrapped around himself to keep from shaking, maybe Zitao isn’t really crying.
Seconds, minutes, hours. That’s how long Zitao does not cry.
lkajdflkjLK;DFJDKFD JUST SHOOT ME INSTEAD UGH I HAD LEGIT TEARS IN MY EYES WHY ;; and when kris got shot by his sTUPID UNCLE I almost flipped a table lbr. i would quote more but i'd probably end up quoting the whole story bc perfect
also i loved how like tao and kris were like each other's pillars of support and ugh idk it was so sweet like kris kind of saved tao first by seeing him and then tao saved kris and how kris just makes tao feel so real and un-invisible and dkjfghdf. AND THAT RED BALL OMG UGH. just. this was so perfect. :( ♥
wow this is a really dumb and long comment i'm sORRY ;a;