ughhhhhhhhhh i was saving up today to read this because i knew i would get addicted to yet another pairing because it seems that everything you write gets me addicted to a pairing (the last one was krislay) and now it's krisyeol
HNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG how was this so perfectly perfect - um i think the highlight of this fic was how adorable chanyeol is, crowding up duizhang's space and all. And that first part where he pulled away from Wu Fan because he was feeling things he shouldn't feel. I feel that you can write simple scenes like wu fan sliding his hands through chanyeol's hair as good, or maybe even better than, your amazing smutty scenes
uffhfhfhhf "Chanyeol laughs, looking absolutely delighted to find Wu Fan in his bed, which makes pleasure slosh hot inside Wu Fan’s gut." ummmmmmmmmmmmmm you're going to kill me because this has been everything i crave for
And i like that wu fan's possessiveness was nicely balanced, not to the point of obsession, but that kind of need that just came with falling in love. It didn't even feel kinky, really, when chanyeol had on that collar - it felt like something natural between the two of them and i have no idea how you write like this but you are one of my favorite authors of all time right now
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Date: 2012-12-03 04:07 am (UTC)i was saving up today to read this because i knew i would get addicted to yet another pairing because it seems that everything you write gets me addicted to a pairing (the last one was krislay) and now it's krisyeol
HNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
how was this so perfectly perfect - um
i think the highlight of this fic was how adorable chanyeol is, crowding up duizhang's space and all. And that first part where he pulled away from Wu Fan because he was feeling things he shouldn't feel. I feel that you can write simple scenes like wu fan sliding his hands through chanyeol's hair as good, or maybe even better than, your amazing smutty scenes
uffhfhfhhf
"Chanyeol laughs, looking absolutely delighted to find Wu Fan in his bed, which makes pleasure slosh hot inside Wu Fan’s gut."
ummmmmmmmmmmmmm
you're going to kill me because this has been everything i crave for
And i like that wu fan's possessiveness was nicely balanced, not to the point of obsession, but that kind of need that just came with falling in love. It didn't even feel kinky, really, when chanyeol had on that collar - it felt like something natural between the two of them
and i have no idea how you write like this
but you are one of my favorite authors of all time right now