I...just...wow. This was amazing. Perfect. Beautiful. I could throw so many positive adjectives at you right now, but none of them could truly sum up just how wonderful this was. I just love all the details in this, from all the ballet terminology to the specific shows to the fact that you even included speed rates with your tempos. You portray the internal struggle between Jongin and Kai so well and ugh just feels everywhere especially with the Odette comparison (I'm not even sure why, but I just particularly liked that). This honestly reflects a lot of what I really think of Kai because idek he is just so different off-stage and on imo.
Everything just fits so wonderfully together. Perfect structure. Perfect writing. Such a perfect ending. I love this. All of it just let me dcalsdkjfasd all over the place now.
ngl I wanted to punch Kai in the face almost every time he showed up but then I was like but Jonginnnn ;A;
...I'm just going to stop now because I've lost all ability to express myself coherently askdlfjasdf.
Can't wait to go through the music selections, but I'll have to do that when it's not 2 AM because I have no headphones. /o\
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Date: 2012-07-12 06:30 am (UTC)Everything just fits so wonderfully together. Perfect structure. Perfect writing. Such a perfect ending. I love this. All of it just let me dcalsdkjfasd all over the place now.
ngl I wanted to punch Kai in the face almost every time he showed up but then I was like but Jonginnnn ;A;
...I'm just going to stop now because I've lost all ability to express myself coherently askdlfjasdf.
Can't wait to go through the music selections, but I'll have to do that when it's not 2 AM because I have no headphones. /o\