I saw a few ppl on my tlist raving about this story and I knew I had to check it out. I don't usually read too many fics, but this is by far one of the better ones I've come across!
Yixing is my favorite member and Krispy Lays my OTP, but I'm not even being biased when I say I loved every single thing about it. The way you gave Yixing so much depth, Kris' insecurities, Lu Han's evilness, Chen's cheekiness, etc, etc. You really took the time to write the members in a way that would stay true to their character (or at least to the way they portray themselves to the fans hahaha). The little flashbacks were awesome as well, and really helped the story.
I feel like I could go on and on about how much I adore your story, but I'll spare you the incoherent spazz haha.
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Date: 2012-07-04 04:58 am (UTC)Yixing is my favorite member and Krispy Lays my OTP, but I'm not even being biased when I say I loved every single thing about it. The way you gave Yixing so much depth, Kris' insecurities, Lu Han's evilness, Chen's cheekiness, etc, etc. You really took the time to write the members in a way that would stay true to their character (or at least to the way they portray themselves to the fans hahaha). The little flashbacks were awesome as well, and really helped the story.
I feel like I could go on and on about how much I adore your story, but I'll spare you the incoherent spazz haha.