This is my first fanfic in any real life Kpop fandom and I am so happy that it is because it's so good. So so so so good and it's just what I had in my mind (but you wrote it better and more eloquent than the blubbering mess I would've produced).
Your characterizations are perfect. You described all the boys in a believable manner and it's so close to what we've seen of their personalities. I can totally picture all of them saying those things and the mannerisms and asldhflhf D:
I'm a huge Krisyeol BROTP shipper and I squealed when you portrayed their friendship. It's so natural and it's just like how I pictured with Chanyeol downloading mixtapes (awwww yeah) and watching cat videos and porn while Kris just laze around and they are so bro by default asdfghjkl. Same goes to Amber/Kris too. But I LOVE the way you wrote Tao/Kris interaction. It seems so neutral and there are no innuendos and the brotherhood thing is so genuine. I salute.
Ok now to Kris/Lay. Let me weep before I begin.
Ok done weeping. You just solidified Kris/Lay as my OTP. Yixing's advances, the conflicts, Kris' confusion- everything was put together perfectly. I'll comment more once I return back to coherency lol
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Date: 2012-07-02 12:49 pm (UTC)Your characterizations are perfect. You described all the boys in a believable manner and it's so close to what we've seen of their personalities. I can totally picture all of them saying those things and the mannerisms and asldhflhf D:
I'm a huge Krisyeol BROTP shipper and I squealed when you portrayed their friendship. It's so natural and it's just like how I pictured with Chanyeol downloading mixtapes (awwww yeah) and watching cat videos and porn while Kris just laze around and they are so bro by default asdfghjkl. Same goes to Amber/Kris too. But I LOVE the way you wrote Tao/Kris interaction. It seems so neutral and there are no innuendos and the brotherhood thing is so genuine. I salute.
Ok now to Kris/Lay. Let me weep before I begin.
Ok done weeping. You just solidified Kris/Lay as my OTP. Yixing's advances, the conflicts, Kris' confusion- everything was put together perfectly. I'll comment more once I return back to coherency lol