Omg, this was seriously a work or pure art. I loved reading every moment of this so, so much. I must say, your characterization of Yixing is starting to make me see him in a different sort of way. I've always loved him, but I could never get a grasp at what kind of personality he has, but after reading this, I feel I can understand him a bit more now. So I thank you for that ♥
I can't think of anything to say about this that hasn't already been said, it's simply flawless. I agree that more people should hop on the Kris/Lay bandwagon because this pairing does deserve more love, and you captured it so perfectly.
One of the things I loved most, was the way you incorporated the relationship, not only between Kris and Lay, but between Kris and the other members as well. I also love the subtle hints of HunHan and Baekyeol you put in here, it was really sweet.
I'm still processing this in my brain so I'm slowly running out of more things to say ;~; ♥ Just know that I really, really, really, super, super love this story!!
Edit: And as a second thought, I have to comment on how much I loved the characterization of each member. I can't put into words how much I absolutely LOVE reading stories where each person acts how they would in real life.
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Date: 2012-07-02 07:46 am (UTC)I can't think of anything to say about this that hasn't already been said, it's simply flawless. I agree that more people should hop on the Kris/Lay bandwagon because this pairing does deserve more love, and you captured it so perfectly.
One of the things I loved most, was the way you incorporated the relationship, not only between Kris and Lay, but between Kris and the other members as well. I also love the subtle hints of HunHan and Baekyeol you put in here, it was really sweet.
I'm still processing this in my brain so I'm slowly running out of more things to say ;~; ♥ Just know that I really, really, really, super, super love this story!!
Edit: And as a second thought, I have to comment on how much I loved the characterization of each member. I can't put into words how much I absolutely LOVE reading stories where each person acts how they would in real life.