YOU. I have no words to describe what I think about this fic. Or maybe there are too many. AS USUAL, I could relate to about 80% of the themes in this fic XD I don’t know how you do it.
“Because you give a lot of love,” Seungri says, and there’s a catch in his voice. “But I think you give it just to prove how easily you can take it away.”
Oh hi there thing I can relate to #475987592 Jeez Maia XD
When Jiyong loves, it’s always too intensely, a brightly burning flame that consumes all the kindling and then the whole forest before it goes out, so quickly that Jiyong is always so surprised when it’s gone, leaving nothing but ash and the memory of green flora in it’s wake. And he’s alone again, the poetry and melody having found a melancholy completion.
*cackles hysterically*
Seungri tries to sit next to Jiyong on the plane, but Jiyong feels cruel, and sits next to Daesung, laughing loud enough for Seungri to hear, and turning away enough to exclude him.
Seungri is right about one thing. Jiyong will always, always use it against him, because the wounded look in Seungri’s eyes is Jiyong’s way of proving to himself that he matters.
Jiyong has always been selfish and greedy.
So usually in your G-Ri fics I relate more to Seungri, but somehow in this fic I related to GD a lot more than usual. Probably because of ~recent events~ but there’ve been too many similar moments in my life to ignore XD
ANYHOW. Enough about me, more fic-flail. I was cackling at the shorts reference and at the TOP with his face in a cake reference, but the ‘ohai GD married Kiko’ bit made me scream. XD For serious. It’s a good thing no one else was home to hear it :P At first I was all, OH NO YOU DIDN’T, but then as the story unravelled and it became clear why they’d gotten married I was all T_____T because ;___; and DDD: (told you I didn’t have words)
I really liked how you described that GD can express himself completely in his music, but he can’t say the same things to people. Because honestly, I think even between good friends, there are things you would say to some people, and things you’d keep hidden from others to the point where you avoid talking to those people altogether. Or maybe that’s just me :’) Anyhow, I really liked that about GD in this fic.
What I also really liked was Seungri standing up for himself, and even trying to give GD a bit of a taste of his own medicine. I think that anyone who’s been feeling manipulated and hurt like that and wouldn’t lash out because of it, must be a saint or without a spine, and I was glad to see that Seungri was neither. I also really liked that he showed up the minute GD alluded to explaining things to Seungri, because being hurt also means you care and him driving over to GD’s place that fast meant that he still hoped for something which just ughh, my heart <3
Also YAY DAESUNG, telling GD to grow up already XD and CL was pretty awesome too <3
So many words in this comment, saying so little, so I’ll stop now XD but all the love for this fic <333 ALLLLL of it <345
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Date: 2012-06-12 01:19 pm (UTC)“Because you give a lot of love,” Seungri says, and there’s a catch in his voice. “But I think you give it just to prove how easily you can take it away.”
Oh hi there thing I can relate to #475987592
Jeez Maia XD
When Jiyong loves, it’s always too intensely, a brightly burning flame that consumes all the kindling and then the whole forest before it goes out, so quickly that Jiyong is always so surprised when it’s gone, leaving nothing but ash and the memory of green flora in it’s wake. And he’s alone again, the poetry and melody having found a melancholy completion.
*cackles hysterically*
Seungri tries to sit next to Jiyong on the plane, but Jiyong feels cruel, and sits next to Daesung, laughing loud enough for Seungri to hear, and turning away enough to exclude him.
Seungri is right about one thing. Jiyong will always, always use it against him, because the wounded look in Seungri’s eyes is Jiyong’s way of proving to himself that he matters.
Jiyong has always been selfish and greedy.
So usually in your G-Ri fics I relate more to Seungri, but somehow in this fic I related to GD a lot more than usual. Probably because of ~recent events~ but there’ve been too many similar moments in my life to ignore XD
ANYHOW. Enough about me, more fic-flail. I was cackling at the shorts reference and at the TOP with his face in a cake reference, but the ‘ohai GD married Kiko’ bit made me scream. XD For serious. It’s a good thing no one else was home to hear it :P At first I was all, OH NO YOU DIDN’T, but then as the story unravelled and it became clear why they’d gotten married I was all T_____T because ;___; and DDD: (told you I didn’t have words)
I really liked how you described that GD can express himself completely in his music, but he can’t say the same things to people. Because honestly, I think even between good friends, there are things you would say to some people, and things you’d keep hidden from others to the point where you avoid talking to those people altogether. Or maybe that’s just me :’) Anyhow, I really liked that about GD in this fic.
What I also really liked was Seungri standing up for himself, and even trying to give GD a bit of a taste of his own medicine. I think that anyone who’s been feeling manipulated and hurt like that and wouldn’t lash out because of it, must be a saint or without a spine, and I was glad to see that Seungri was neither. I also really liked that he showed up the minute GD alluded to explaining things to Seungri, because being hurt also means you care and him driving over to GD’s place that fast meant that he still hoped for something which just ughh, my heart <3
Also YAY DAESUNG, telling GD to grow up already XD and CL was pretty awesome too <3
So many words in this comment, saying so little, so I’ll stop now XD but all the love for this fic <333 ALLLLL of it <345