wow after i read this i had to take a break and go to a billion other things before writing a comment bc alskdjfls WHEW OVERWHELMED. this fic was amazing, it's definitely the best 'normal non-idol life' au in this fandom, i can't believe it was so LONG i can't believe fandom was lucky enough to get such a long great fic :3 WHERE DO I EVEN START alskdjf this is not in any order but 1) THE CLEVER WAY YOU WORKED IN ALL THE CANON DETAILS, 2) THEIR CHARACTERIZATION, 3) baekhyun and chanyeol's beautiful relationship, so tender and yearning and not overwrought or unnecessary at all, 4) your writing itself, 5) how naturally hilarious everything was
okay i'm referring back to the first part and LOL ALL OF THE JOKES ABOUT KYUNGSOO'S EYES, jesus christ that never fucking got old, it was so perfect, ALL OF THEIR NATURAL BANTER. SUHO'S (and everyone else's) REMARKS ABOUT CHANYEOL'S FACE THROUGHOUT, seriously sometimes descriptions of their rl attributes like that are so glaringly obvious and awkward BUT IT WAS SO WELL DONE AND SO FUNNY HERE alksdjf the part where chanyeol laughs and claps, "consumed w/ laughter" or smth, PERFECT way of putting it. "I never know what anyone means," Kyungsoo says. "It's safer that way." c r y i n g i fucking love your d.o i literally cannot stress this enough every single time he did anything i had a fit “Someone is going to die down here someday,” Kyungsoo says. “Lawsuits are more expensive than air conditioning.”
JONGHYUN BEING ON TWITTER, all the allusions to kris and -m being peripherally present alksdhg so perfect and baekhyun omfg baekhyun so fucking precious, the sweetest entry alskdf okay wait gonna talk about lu han first YOUR AMAZING LU HAN like one_if said i could just read 30k of your lu han because he is P E R F E C T, him convincing sehun to do shit, getting off scot-free, face simultaneously satan/cupcake sob sob sob CHANYEOL'S ELECTROCUTED HAIR all of your precious canon bits
“You look cute.” Baekhyun’s gaze fixates somewhere past Chanyeol as he says it, but when he’s finished, he seems to check Chanyeol’s face for a reaction to his words. i couldn't believe i was literally squirming w/ how cute everything like halfway through just the first part but laskdhg this was probably one of my favourite lines overall, baekhyun is just so GLORIOUSLY PERFECT, how he's bold and approaching chanyeol, but with that perfect edge of tentative shyness because he's been stanning this guy for a year, how he'll say this stuff unable to do a full-on delivery but still god THIS IS JUST SO. HUMAN. his and chanyeol's constant back and forth, most of the time being normal but every once in a while skirting the whole awkward fan vs. 'idol' thing, SO GREAT. and baekhyun's perfect eyebrows, wow i just love how you characterized him, he's so immaculate and delicate but of course completely avoids--is nowhere fucking close--to that tired 'girl' slash trope, he's just like that, being careful, taking care. AND HIS "NO I DON'T SING" alskgh god i was so hooked by the end of that first part, helplessly, by everythingggg
KAI TELLING EVERYONE, alskdf WHAT EXPRESSION IS THAT CHANYEOL, D.O'S RESIGNATION/APATHY AT THE FRIES, their concept is too adult oh my god. “No I’m not,” Kyungsoo says. “I think strangers are afraid of me.” FITS. SO MANY FITS. i don't even alskdjf please just assume i loved and laughed over every single interactive scene to bits bc otherwise this comment will never end. THOUGH, SEHUN'S QUIET REMARKS, HIS QUIET LU HAN REMARKS, jongin being shy w/ strangers but brazen w/ them, so perfect
and i haven't mentioned how much i love that baekhyun is the stan, BECAUSE HE REALLY FUCKING IS, JUST LOOK AT HIM IN REALITY. alsdjf working in their mama lyrics, 'two moons', fuck how baekhyun is unsure about why chanyeol wants to have lunch so quick, fuuuuuck it was so cute and aching i was just wiggling all over my sofa
COOKIES AND HOW THEY ARE SUCH BOYS, taking them to the beach i can't believe you took them to the beach i'm so happy. DISNEY. "WHY AM I INVITED". your perfect -m cameos, "maybe lay will even speak", THE POT JOKE, precious tao T______________T---PUPPY NOISES. WAH. WAHH. sunscreen and kkamjong
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Date: 2012-05-21 11:13 pm (UTC)okay i'm referring back to the first part and LOL ALL OF THE JOKES ABOUT KYUNGSOO'S EYES, jesus christ that never fucking got old, it was so perfect, ALL OF THEIR NATURAL BANTER. SUHO'S (and everyone else's) REMARKS ABOUT CHANYEOL'S FACE THROUGHOUT, seriously sometimes descriptions of their rl attributes like that are so glaringly obvious and awkward BUT IT WAS SO WELL DONE AND SO FUNNY HERE alksdjf the part where chanyeol laughs and claps, "consumed w/ laughter" or smth, PERFECT way of putting it. "I never know what anyone means," Kyungsoo says. "It's safer that way." c r y i n g i fucking love your d.o i literally cannot stress this enough every single time he did anything i had a fit “Someone is going to die down here someday,” Kyungsoo says. “Lawsuits are more expensive than air conditioning.”
JONGHYUN BEING ON TWITTER, all the allusions to kris and -m being peripherally present alksdhg so perfect and baekhyun omfg baekhyun so fucking precious, the sweetest entry alskdf okay wait gonna talk about lu han first YOUR AMAZING LU HAN like one_if said i could just read 30k of your lu han because he is P E R F E C T, him convincing sehun to do shit, getting off scot-free, face simultaneously satan/cupcake sob sob sob CHANYEOL'S ELECTROCUTED HAIR all of your precious canon bits
“You look cute.” Baekhyun’s gaze fixates somewhere past Chanyeol as he says it, but when he’s finished, he seems to check Chanyeol’s face for a reaction to his words. i couldn't believe i was literally squirming w/ how cute everything like halfway through just the first part but laskdhg this was probably one of my favourite lines overall, baekhyun is just so GLORIOUSLY PERFECT, how he's bold and approaching chanyeol, but with that perfect edge of tentative shyness because he's been stanning this guy for a year, how he'll say this stuff unable to do a full-on delivery but still god THIS IS JUST SO. HUMAN. his and chanyeol's constant back and forth, most of the time being normal but every once in a while skirting the whole awkward fan vs. 'idol' thing, SO GREAT. and baekhyun's perfect eyebrows, wow i just love how you characterized him, he's so immaculate and delicate but of course completely avoids--is nowhere fucking close--to that tired 'girl' slash trope, he's just like that, being careful, taking care. AND HIS "NO I DON'T SING" alskgh god i was so hooked by the end of that first part, helplessly, by everythingggg
KAI TELLING EVERYONE, alskdf WHAT EXPRESSION IS THAT CHANYEOL, D.O'S RESIGNATION/APATHY AT THE FRIES, their concept is too adult oh my god. “No I’m not,” Kyungsoo says. “I think strangers are afraid of me.” FITS. SO MANY FITS. i don't even alskdjf please just assume i loved and laughed over every single interactive scene to bits bc otherwise this comment will never end. THOUGH, SEHUN'S QUIET REMARKS, HIS QUIET LU HAN REMARKS, jongin being shy w/ strangers but brazen w/ them, so perfect
and i haven't mentioned how much i love that baekhyun is the stan, BECAUSE HE REALLY FUCKING IS, JUST LOOK AT HIM IN REALITY. alsdjf working in their mama lyrics, 'two moons', fuck how baekhyun is unsure about why chanyeol wants to have lunch so quick, fuuuuuck it was so cute and aching i was just wiggling all over my sofa
COOKIES AND HOW THEY ARE SUCH BOYS, taking them to the beach i can't believe you took them to the beach i'm so happy. DISNEY. "WHY AM I INVITED". your perfect -m cameos, "maybe lay will even speak", THE POT JOKE, precious tao T______________T---PUPPY NOISES. WAH. WAHH. sunscreen and kkamjong