Um, okay, please forgive me for the insane amount of word vomit that is about to follow, but I just finished this epic, over 30,000 words holy fuck, and I haven't even given myself time to collect my thoughts so everything is going to come out in one huge, long rush.
This story, is fucking perfect; and I honestly mean that with every shred of truth that I hold within my body. This story is unlike anything, at worst, I have read in a long time, or at best, ever read. This is Absolute Chanyeol good, and by-fucking-god that's saying something. This story is on par with Absolute Chanyeol, these two stories are fucking deskmates in the best-stories-in-the-world-class. This story was so good that when I finished it I teared up - and nothing sad even fucking happened. I never cry when I read anything, the only exception is two stories throughout my life and Absolute Chanyeol and Be Human. I have never cried for anything else, and yet this story that was happy made me want to bust out in tears, and isn't that just fucking weird.
This story is the story that I have been looking for for, if not my life, for many, many years. It is so flawlessly put together. Your writing style leaves me in awe - this is the exact writing style that I have wanted to possess my entire life; this is the writing style that I burn with jealously over because it's everything I wish I had. Your writing style is so beautifully descriptive, effortless to the extent that words just flow and I lost track of time just reading, your characters are fucking perfect, they each have characters that stand on their own, that are relatable and fun and just vibrant and so alive, your choice of words are perfect, your sense of humour is spot on and it just works on so many levels, you write cleverly and that isn't something that a lot of people can achieve. Your story was amazingly crafted, each scene held it's own and helped tell one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read.
I'm just... in awe of this story, honestly, and I'll try my best to talk about the stuff that I liked - when in reality I liked every single word that was put down.
The way this story flowed was just... I have no words... perfect. You wrote a story in which you wrote an entire relationship developing over time - it is so hard to do that. It was so effortless and natural and it felt so real; to see how Chanyeol's mind and heart slowly changed as he fell for Baekhyun. By fucking god, this story was so real. You even wrote how he fought against his feelings and you wrote them talking about their relationship as real people would and by god this story is just so amazingly written. In all AU stories that I read, this is what I want to find. I want to be taken on this journey where I see the feelings grow and develop and see how they change the characters and that is exactly what you've done and it's so perfect that it makes me want to cry because it's left such an emotional impact and I'm green with envy.
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Date: 2012-05-21 08:54 pm (UTC)Part 1:
Um, okay, please forgive me for the insane amount of word vomit that is about to follow, but I just finished this epic, over 30,000 words holy fuck, and I haven't even given myself time to collect my thoughts so everything is going to come out in one huge, long rush.
This story, is fucking perfect; and I honestly mean that with every shred of truth that I hold within my body. This story is unlike anything, at worst, I have read in a long time, or at best, ever read. This is Absolute Chanyeol good, and by-fucking-god that's saying something. This story is on par with Absolute Chanyeol, these two stories are fucking deskmates in the best-stories-in-the-world-class. This story was so good that when I finished it I teared up - and nothing sad even fucking happened. I never cry when I read anything, the only exception is two stories throughout my life and Absolute Chanyeol and Be Human. I have never cried for anything else, and yet this story that was happy made me want to bust out in tears, and isn't that just fucking weird.
This story is the story that I have been looking for for, if not my life, for many, many years. It is so flawlessly put together. Your writing style leaves me in awe - this is the exact writing style that I have wanted to possess my entire life; this is the writing style that I burn with jealously over because it's everything I wish I had. Your writing style is so beautifully descriptive, effortless to the extent that words just flow and I lost track of time just reading, your characters are fucking perfect, they each have characters that stand on their own, that are relatable and fun and just vibrant and so alive, your choice of words are perfect, your sense of humour is spot on and it just works on so many levels, you write cleverly and that isn't something that a lot of people can achieve. Your story was amazingly crafted, each scene held it's own and helped tell one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read.
I'm just... in awe of this story, honestly, and I'll try my best to talk about the stuff that I liked - when in reality I liked every single word that was put down.
The way this story flowed was just... I have no words... perfect. You wrote a story in which you wrote an entire relationship developing over time - it is so hard to do that. It was so effortless and natural and it felt so real; to see how Chanyeol's mind and heart slowly changed as he fell for Baekhyun. By fucking god, this story was so real. You even wrote how he fought against his feelings and you wrote them talking about their relationship as real people would and by god this story is just so amazingly written. In all AU stories that I read, this is what I want to find. I want to be taken on this journey where I see the feelings grow and develop and see how they change the characters and that is exactly what you've done and it's so perfect that it makes me want to cry because it's left such an emotional impact and I'm green with envy.