I read this a couple of nights ago and held off commenting because I wanted to compose something that would, more or less, capture how much I love this fic. So here it is:
The story is solid and pure gold (and I must thank bellemelody for inspiring this). It's inspired to make Kame being a method actor and completely immersed in his characters as a premise from which the story evolved.
I love how you wrote Kame and Jin. You took the bits and pieces of what is known of them (or the general impression on them) and wove them to make complex characters we can understand and, thus, empathize with.
I adore the push and pull of Kame and Jin as Kame and Jin playing their characters. Kame being Honoko relating to Jin being Takamori and eventually really just Jin makes Kame's inner turmoil all the more compelling.
And that ending there where they kissed and made out in the hallway is absolutely hot because it's about Kame finally knowing what he wants and Jin finally getting what he wants and nothing can be hotter than that.
I can go on and on but all I can say in the end is that when I thought I've read the best of them Akame fics, this...THIS. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.
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Date: 2011-09-30 05:14 pm (UTC)The story is solid and pure gold (and I must thank
I love how you wrote Kame and Jin. You took the bits and pieces of what is known of them (or the general impression on them) and wove them to make complex characters we can understand and, thus, empathize with.
I adore the push and pull of Kame and Jin as Kame and Jin playing their characters. Kame being Honoko relating to Jin being Takamori and eventually really just Jin makes Kame's inner turmoil all the more compelling.
And that ending there where they kissed and made out in the hallway is absolutely hot because it's about Kame finally knowing what he wants and Jin finally getting what he wants and nothing can be hotter than that.
I can go on and on but all I can say in the end is that when I thought I've read the best of them Akame fics, this...THIS. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.
Thank you so much for writing it.