I think you guys just fucked and debauched the image I had of the whole of EXO, except, maybe, probably, obviously, TAO.
Actually I think it was pretty fucked up from the moment I related the "it's not what it seems" phrase with them. Especially Luhan. But damn if this fic just didn't enhance, magnify and pimp the way I see him. I think I'm still seeing lights, feeling dizzy and confused just like Jongin was most of the time in this fic. I really wasn't expecting this Luhan to be like he is. I like the subtle irony though. That no one expects angelic, doe-eyed Luhan to be quite the whore (bless his ass). I totally fell for this Luhan, mostly because you guys made it for him to be the ball of contrasts you wouldn't otherwise expect him to be. Whether it was getting plugged at the age of thirteen or taking tantric yoga classes with his Korean tutor. Funny how in reality the contrasts are found in his nerdiness (or supposed nerdiness, because most people don't expect the pretty ones to have a background like his. Toying with a roughed up version of legally blonde starring Luhan...) but in here it leans towards his sexuality.
What a vixen.
I love him.
Yet again, the things that I found arousing in here were not the sex scenes per se (as lovely and steamy as they were) but other things like the openness of the members, the jokes between them, the noises through the walls, the notion of Minseok sleeping on his bed knowing Luhan and Jongin had sex there multiple times. Jongdae and his crush on Amber, Chanyeol being a crazy, hilarious ass from hell unf. Ace as Kris' stripper name, or him in a mini skirt, or him opening the door and acting like Luhan is not getting ass fucked by Jongin. Kris and Yixing getting tutorin from Luhan. Jongdae's amazing humor. Junmyeon's crush on Kyuhyun. Hyo's encouraging messages to Jongin. Everyone and their mother knowing about Jongin and his problem. Those industrial sized bottles of lube. Or the string of come on Luhan's face while a picture is taken. Or the guys acting like it's not big deal some of them are practically humping each other. The whole sexual ambiance built up no matter how improbable that could be in real life.
It was things like that that made me squeal into the sun. Little bad ass details thorough the story that made me chew my fist and garble "Fuuuuuuuuuuuuck".
I like you guys writing around actual EXO in real life. Whether it was the airports of Kris getting Ace or SMTOWN. It just made it heady and my head was spinning from it all.
I also like the air-head whore hottie vibe I got from Yixing. I can just imagine him playing the guitar while getting a blowjob or him being fucked into the mattress while he hums a song because he is such a hippie. His absentmindedness is just delicious to picture.
I prefer stories like In Monochrome myself. I can always do with eroticism with real plot too (though those are harder to find in EXO fandom), but this story is perfect for what it tries to be and it doesn't ever pretend to be something else. There was no "Let's pretend it's real luffffff when it's just good ole' porn without plot". No hinting to "let's make a story where they have sex and suddenly they love each other for some reason because sex equals loves! :DD". I like that, that no pretending bullshit is other bullshit. That's why it's such an amazing story. And again, lesser authors would have fucked this up but this is maia and jo and even in craziness and all that stuff you manage to come up with this holy script of sex.
By the way, if I could come up with a soundtrack for this story I totally want to point out these two songs:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dkDZV9DGi1o
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o8j13_MyojI
The second one I still relate to a faraway fantasy where maia writes an epic Xiuhan but I ain't pushing nothing so here it goes.
P.S I had so many things to write here but the comment is looking long already so :/
P.S.2. Damn I still blame maia, fumerie and ladernim for making me like reading fics about real people.
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Actually I think it was pretty fucked up from the moment I related the "it's not what it seems" phrase with them. Especially Luhan. But damn if this fic just didn't enhance, magnify and pimp the way I see him. I think I'm still seeing lights, feeling dizzy and confused just like Jongin was most of the time in this fic. I really wasn't expecting this Luhan to be like he is. I like the subtle irony though. That no one expects angelic, doe-eyed Luhan to be quite the whore (bless his ass). I totally fell for this Luhan, mostly because you guys made it for him to be the ball of contrasts you wouldn't otherwise expect him to be. Whether it was getting plugged at the age of thirteen or taking tantric yoga classes with his Korean tutor. Funny how in reality the contrasts are found in his nerdiness (or supposed nerdiness, because most people don't expect the pretty ones to have a background like his. Toying with a roughed up version of legally blonde starring Luhan...) but in here it leans towards his sexuality.
What a vixen.
I love him.
Yet again, the things that I found arousing in here were not the sex scenes per se (as lovely and steamy as they were) but other things like the openness of the members, the jokes between them, the noises through the walls, the notion of Minseok sleeping on his bed knowing Luhan and Jongin had sex there multiple times. Jongdae and his crush on Amber, Chanyeol being a crazy, hilarious ass from hell unf. Ace as Kris' stripper name, or him in a mini skirt, or him opening the door and acting like Luhan is not getting ass fucked by Jongin. Kris and Yixing getting tutorin from Luhan. Jongdae's amazing humor. Junmyeon's crush on Kyuhyun. Hyo's encouraging messages to Jongin. Everyone and their mother knowing about Jongin and his problem. Those industrial sized bottles of lube. Or the string of come on Luhan's face while a picture is taken. Or the guys acting like it's not big deal some of them are practically humping each other. The whole sexual ambiance built up no matter how improbable that could be in real life.
It was things like that that made me squeal into the sun. Little bad ass details thorough the story that made me chew my fist and garble "Fuuuuuuuuuuuuck".
I like you guys writing around actual EXO in real life. Whether it was the airports of Kris getting Ace or SMTOWN. It just made it heady and my head was spinning from it all.
I also like the air-head whore hottie vibe I got from Yixing. I can just imagine him playing the guitar while getting a blowjob or him being fucked into the mattress while he hums a song because he is such a hippie. His absentmindedness is just delicious to picture.
I prefer stories like In Monochrome myself. I can always do with eroticism with real plot too (though those are harder to find in EXO fandom), but this story is perfect for what it tries to be and it doesn't ever pretend to be something else. There was no "Let's pretend it's real luffffff when it's just good ole' porn without plot". No hinting to "let's make a story where they have sex and suddenly they love each other for some reason because sex equals loves! :DD". I like that, that no pretending bullshit is other bullshit. That's why it's such an amazing story. And again, lesser authors would have fucked this up but this is maia and jo and even in craziness and all that stuff you manage to come up with this holy script of sex.
By the way, if I could come up with a soundtrack for this story I totally want to point out these two songs:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dkDZV9DGi1o
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o8j13_MyojI
The second one I still relate to a faraway fantasy where maia writes an epic Xiuhan but I ain't pushing nothing so here it goes.
P.S I had so many things to write here but the comment is looking long already so :/
P.S.2. Damn I still blame maia, fumerie and ladernim for making me like reading fics about real people.