http://loudestoflove.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] maayacolabackup 2012-11-23 03:51 am (UTC)

maiaaaaaaaaaaaa omg. bless you and yr sex pollen kai.

basically i loved everything about this? i love how you always nail the intergroup dynamics, not just that of the main pairing or w/e but your side characters are always so alive and pitch perfect. it's just all the little things, like chanyeol's hair bouncing or the way he leans way too far into someone's personal space, or baekhyun buffing his nails on his shirt (killing me), they were all so funny and lovely.

also: “Do you watch a lot of gay fetish porn, maknae?” Baekhyun asks from the hallway CRYING, BAEKHYUN PLS.

your sehun is always a delight, the way he tortured jongin the whole time, perfect. their friendship was such a perfect blend of teenage fucktruckery and kind of actually giving a fuck underneath, i loved it. their squabbling and sehun's complete lack of fucks given about whether or not he embarrassed jongin, EXCELLENT.

i always love your jongin, what a dumbass. always pretty much oblivious to what is happening around him and so unable to actually use words like a real human being. also i rly liked how you did the whole sex pollen thing! especially how long it took jongin to figure out that the itch was suho cock fever. bless his heart. i love how well you set up joonmyun's feelings too, with the little cues that we picked up but actual dumbass kim jongin did not. HIS UGLY SWEATERS, MAIA MY HEART. HIS POOR RUINED UGLY SWEATERS. poor joonmyun, he probably spent those entire two weeks either sticking things up jongin's butt or doing laundry. a leader's job is never done. it's so tricky to do sukai in a way that feels plausible and ugh your sukai. jongin is prickly and joonmyun is so eager to please and ugh. JONGIN TRYING TO SHOW HIS AFFECTION BY SHARING HIS SWEATER HE'S SUCH A CHILD.

one of the best things i ever did was helping infect you with suho feelings because i love your sweet, awkward, trying so hard, so responsible suho i just want to give him a hug.

TL;DR MAIA. MAIA PLS. 18K OF GLORIOUS PWP WITH FLUFF AND FEELINGS IT'S MY FAVOURITE THING

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