http://buzzbird.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] buzzbird.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] maayacolabackup 2012-10-24 07:18 pm (UTC)

Ugh where do I even begin with this comment. I loved everything.

I don't want to leave another one-word comment again, but...

Okay so one thing I really really loved is that you wrote something magical again and it reminded me of Pin flowers only angstier and shorter and more porn but still so lovely to read. I loved the whole way you wrote their interaction, how they didn't understand each other and that's why they kept getting hurt, and then when they were shown a little bit they were able to piece it all together (with help!! XD omfg Kris and Baekhyun and hugs and I SEE YOUR OT3 DON'T THINK I DIDN'T SEE THEM). And I loved how Jongin was possessive and Chanyeol misinterpreted those feelings because he's not a possessive person at all and he doesn't understand the feeling and ugh.

Okay, I'm out of words to can.

The porn was fucking glorious btw. jsyk.

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