So... I just finished reading this. I will admit that I am a bit of a writing snob, and while I enjoy fanfiction, too many out there are written by someone who has no business writing. Most are terrible; some are passable, a few are wonderful. I have found several that have been addicting, and now, I have found one that is truly mesmerizing and beautiful.

The way that you wrote this... it is indescribable. Beautiful, haunting, melancholy, tantalizing, mesmerizing... no words can truly describe it. I love this story and thank you for sharing it... it's the crown jewel of any fanfiction I have ever read, and better than many printed works.

Keep up the wonderful work! <3