http://grapefruitade.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] grapefruitade.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] maayacolabackup 2012-12-05 07:44 am (UTC)

Fics that incorporate photography - and incorporate it well - are my weakness. And I just really adore how you interwove photography with Yixing's character development. ♥\(; A ; \)
(Like how, by the end of the fic, he started shooting in color. That's a big step!)
I really adored all the small details and tips about film photography too. Do you engage in film photography yourself?

On another note, author-nim, you're always so good at pacing your story and making all your characters likable during that time. (/ ; w ;)/♥
I can't imagine how long it must have taken to write something of this length and quality, but damn, the gradual crescendo of plot was great. And it was intriguing to see how you plotted the members' roles and personalities. On that note, I feel like I've fallen in love with your Jongin too; the way you wrote Yixing's slow realization of his true emotions drew in my own emotions, and I became invested in KaiXing's relationship too. ASDFGHJKLKJHGFDS eeeeeeep~ \( ; u ; )/


Flawless fic was flaw to the less. ♥♥♥♥♥

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