wow why my comment showed up twice UNINTENDED I PROMISE
okay, i finally know-ish what i want to say ;a;
number one! i love how you wrote about something that i'm pretty sure everyone likes or, at least, is curious about. it makes it more intriguing and lovely since everyone has a soft spot for it one way or another, because really: no one can grow up without a touch of photography gracing their lives whether it's family pictures or in textbooks. but i'm 90% sure that the curiosity comes from whether it's a beginner or an expert, a good picture evokes something in everyone. which is pretty poetic without words.
dos! i really, really, really love how you write! this might be because you wrote my all time favorite exo fic (universal languages; taochen ;w;), but it's like you write because the story is going to burst from you if you don't instead of writing because you want to get something out—an absolute need for words to come alive under your fingertips, and it really does come alive.
trois! 99% of their relationship in here is just like them in real life (without, you know, kisses/sex/etc. romantic stuff). i don't even know how you did that. did you wave around a magic wand, say abracadabra with the underlying meaning of "HYPOTHETICALLY if yixing and jongin were to be romantic in real life, what would it look like?" and you saw it in your crystal ball? because holy shit, it's really beautiful and seems so utterly real, i don't know how to explain it ;a; but it's really lovely and amazing! good job ♥
now for the actual fic omg ;; i loved how you managed to unfold both of them so gently and carefully. but i-i don't really know what to say other than that :( your fics leave me breathless because i feel like i'm living through them in some weird and twisted way—that's just how well you describe things. i just—i don't know how to say what i want to say without it sounding like i'm babbling, but it's really, really beautiful ♥
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okay, i finally know-ish what i want to say ;a;
number one! i love how you wrote about something that i'm pretty sure everyone likes or, at least, is curious about. it makes it more intriguing and lovely since everyone has a soft spot for it one way or another, because really: no one can grow up without a touch of photography gracing their lives whether it's family pictures or in textbooks. but i'm 90% sure that the curiosity comes from whether it's a beginner or an expert, a good picture evokes something in everyone. which is pretty poetic without words.
dos! i really, really, really love how you write! this might be because you wrote my all time favorite exo fic (universal languages; taochen ;w;), but it's like you write because the story is going to burst from you if you don't instead of writing because you want to get something out—an absolute need for words to come alive under your fingertips, and it really does come alive.
trois! 99% of their relationship in here is just like them in real life (without, you know, kisses/sex/etc. romantic stuff). i don't even know how you did that. did you wave around a magic wand, say abracadabra with the underlying meaning of "HYPOTHETICALLY if yixing and jongin were to be romantic in real life, what would it look like?" and you saw it in your crystal ball? because holy shit, it's really beautiful and seems so utterly real, i don't know how to explain it ;a; but it's really lovely and amazing! good job ♥
now for the actual fic omg ;; i loved how you managed to unfold both of them so gently and carefully. but i-i don't really know what to say other than that :( your fics leave me breathless because i feel like i'm living through them in some weird and twisted way—that's just how well you describe things. i just—i don't know how to say what i want to say without it sounding like i'm babbling, but it's really, really beautiful ♥