ext_185983 ([identity profile] boeboebi.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] maayacolabackup 2012-08-18 04:42 am (UTC)

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i like the setting youve set up for the both of them. rather, i really like how you characterized chanyeol (not cuz hes bottom lmao tho that was nice too). hes usually taking the lead in most fics, so when you portray him in such an insecure and lenient yeol it was change, but you did so smoothly and quite subtle. the chemistry and atmosphere and the things left unsaid were just ughhh wonderful overall. the characters were mature, and i love matured!baekyeol.

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