wow that was long yet very entertaining. i didn't find myself getting bored even just for a second ;___;
hm i don't know how to start this, but gosh srsly how could you write so good? I think every single word seems to connect with the other in a very wonderful way, one that makes my eyes glued to the screen until i finish reading this piece. i personally think you're one of the best writers here on LJ, because you write beautifully and i can understand how the story goes. this required some thinking about how kai overlaps jongin, about how it actually works, but i understood everything in the end, so i finished off with a smile.
aside from your writing, i love the plot and the characterization as well. mainly because your jongin is precious, no matter how saddening he is because he can't control himself well (because if one couldn't contro himself well then how could he control anything else in his life?), but yeah, i must admit that i get really happy when jongin manages to take over the kai inside of him. that's a moment of triumph and i feel genuinely happy with that. he finally decides to be himself, no matter how hard it's gonna be, and sehun adds fuel to the fire by perpetually saying that he likes jongin. sehun helps him a lot and i guess this is why i love your sehun :3
hm, sometimes jongin makes me think a lot, too. he's stated that he loves dancing and isn't really into singing, so this story seems to fit so well into the actual reality and i find myself awe-struck by the series of events here, because they seem so real. jongin here agreed to join SM mainly because he wanted to keep on dancing, wanted to only dance, and jongin in real life did the exact same thing. and yes, i realize how jongin can be shy and sexy at the same time, lmfao, but that is why i love him (no matter how bipolar that is).
lemme love you. thank you so so so very much for this one /throws confettis ♥
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hm i don't know how to start this, but gosh srsly how could you write so good? I think every single word seems to connect with the other in a very wonderful way, one that makes my eyes glued to the screen until i finish reading this piece. i personally think you're one of the best writers here on LJ, because you write beautifully and i can understand how the story goes. this required some thinking about how kai overlaps jongin, about how it actually works, but i understood everything in the end, so i finished off with a smile.
aside from your writing, i love the plot and the characterization as well. mainly because your jongin is precious, no matter how saddening he is because he can't control himself well (because if one couldn't contro himself well then how could he control anything else in his life?), but yeah, i must admit that i get really happy when jongin manages to take over the kai inside of him. that's a moment of triumph and i feel genuinely happy with that. he finally decides to be himself, no matter how hard it's gonna be, and sehun adds fuel to the fire by perpetually saying that he likes jongin. sehun helps him a lot and i guess this is why i love your sehun :3
hm, sometimes jongin makes me think a lot, too. he's stated that he loves dancing and isn't really into singing, so this story seems to fit so well into the actual reality and i find myself awe-struck by the series of events here, because they seem so real. jongin here agreed to join SM mainly because he wanted to keep on dancing, wanted to only dance, and jongin in real life did the exact same thing. and yes, i realize how jongin can be shy and sexy at the same time, lmfao, but that is why i love him (no matter how bipolar that is).
lemme love you. thank you so so so very much for this one /throws confettis ♥