Mother of God, this was fascinating to read. I hate to sound trite, but this was beautiful. The weaving of ballet terms through everything was wonderfully done and definitely added, instead of detracted, to the fic. The order of how you wrote everything was great too. And the addition of the tempos, goodness. I just. Um. I'm not sure what to say.
I just really adore fics that deal with how idols deal with their stage personas, and I love how you depicted Jongin's struggle to find a balance within himself. I also really liked how you added in all the different SM characters and depicted the different ways they offered advice. (There was something about Kyungsoo that really stuck out to me, for some reason. Umma-soo. ;u;)
But um, yeah. Everything about this was pretty much flaw to the less. ♥
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I just really adore fics that deal with how idols deal with their stage personas, and I love how you depicted Jongin's struggle to find a balance within himself. I also really liked how you added in all the different SM characters and depicted the different ways they offered advice. (There was something about Kyungsoo that really stuck out to me, for some reason. Umma-soo. ;u;)
But um, yeah. Everything about this was pretty much flaw to the less. ♥