i don't think i should be commenting because i'm overwhelmed by i don't even know what feelings and when i'm overwhelmed i can get vulgar and ugh what is punctuation. i'll try to tame myself.
it'll take a hell of a lot of time to catch my breath. i don't understand how you even managed to write something like this. and you're not even a native speaker feel my envy. to the publisher and directly to printing, i'd say. if it weren't based on korean idols, that is, public would frown upon that. ...as they probably would on the homosexuality but okay.
i love jongin's polarity. i'm also probably one of the very few people who give him the benefit of a doubt that he's both. the way i'd like to see him is the way he is at the end of the story. merged, in control. putting on a performance when it's needed but also a performance that still comes from himself. ...i don't know, i have head canons of just about everything so i'll just shut up. but the way you took the polarity and built this on it was wonderful and breathtaking.
i think it might also convince me to actually pay a little bit of attention to ballet. aaaand classical music. i've never been a fan of classical music but the last time i actually tried listening to it the only ones i could actually find myself sort of liking were dvorak and tchaikovsky (i hope i wrote that right, i have no idea how the transcription into english works and i don't even have azbuka installed so yeah, forgive me if it's wrong i'm too lazy to google it). but that was also when i was about fourteen so i might as well try again.
i haven't even commented on anything writing-wise. but I don't think i'd be able to say anything of importance because i find it impeccable. everything flows the right way, everything's just right. also, i refuse to analyse this in any way because even if i were to find anything, it would make little difference. it's just very beautiful as a whole.
i'm off to curl into a little ball in the corner of the room and sob over how talentless i am.
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it'll take a hell of a lot of time to catch my breath. i don't understand how you even managed to write something like this. and you're not even a native speaker feel my envy. to the publisher and directly to printing, i'd say. if it weren't based on korean idols, that is, public would frown upon that. ...as they probably would on the homosexuality but okay.
i love jongin's polarity. i'm also probably one of the very few people who give him the benefit of a doubt that he's both. the way i'd like to see him is the way he is at the end of the story. merged, in control. putting on a performance when it's needed but also a performance that still comes from himself. ...i don't know, i have head canons of just about everything so i'll just shut up. but the way you took the polarity and built this on it was wonderful and breathtaking.
i think it might also convince me to actually pay a little bit of attention to ballet. aaaand classical music. i've never been a fan of classical music but the last time i actually tried listening to it the only ones i could actually find myself sort of liking were dvorak and tchaikovsky (i hope i wrote that right, i have no idea how the transcription into english works and i don't even have azbuka installed so yeah, forgive me if it's wrong i'm too lazy to google it). but that was also when i was about fourteen so i might as well try again.
i haven't even commented on anything writing-wise. but I don't think i'd be able to say anything of importance because i find it impeccable. everything flows the right way, everything's just right. also, i refuse to analyse this in any way because even if i were to find anything, it would make little difference. it's just very beautiful as a whole.
i'm off to curl into a little ball in the corner of the room and sob over how talentless i am.