this story was my first exo fanfiction favorite, and after so long i think it's about time i left a comment now "OTL
this is everything i like about boy's love: friendship, fear, and all sorts of tension. it's even better that you've wrapped their characters up in such a way that i see kris the way he sees himself here (average, a little awkward) and yixing the way he's being seen, as beautiful and exciting. the build -up is so good that when they finally touch each other with no restraints, it's a true climax :)
the one thing i'm a little unsure about is the ending, because it turned their worries into something more trivial - BUT only the reason i feel this way is just cuz i like angst so much sometimes that i dont wan't to let it go - -"
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this is everything i like about boy's love: friendship, fear, and all sorts of tension. it's even better that you've wrapped their characters up in such a way that i see kris the way he sees himself here (average, a little awkward) and yixing the way he's being seen, as beautiful and exciting. the build -up is so good that when they finally touch each other with no restraints, it's a true climax :)
the one thing i'm a little unsure about is the ending, because it turned their worries into something more trivial - BUT only the reason i feel this way is just cuz i like angst so much sometimes that i dont wan't to let it go - -"
thank you for writing this beauty ; u ; ~