ugh man. You are honestly my favourite writer on lj, and I loved all of your nyongtori fics, and when I saw you had written exo I was like so excited i couldn't contain myself.
The thing about your stories is though, that they are always so intense and rich with flawless characterization and compelling dialogue and real situations and it kind of leaves me breathless, and I stayed up because i had to read it before i went to bed, but i can never be sure what state i'm going to be in once i'm done and now it's 4 am and i can not even....

what is grammar, what is coherency.

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