Wow, I'm not even sure what to say or how to start, because your fics are always so long and satisfying and complete, and I end up feeling too overwhelmed and inadequate to give proper feedback, but: just like before, your band interactions are such a delight; you are SO GOOD with details, it's crazy. Suho going on about golf to Kris (WHY IS THIS NOT A RECURRING EXO JOKE), Yixing trying to pull rank with his industry history ("I was a child star. I have a lot of complexes." & "I'm a variety show veteran", I totally laughed out loud), Kris picking up random vocabulary words because he figures they'll be useful eventually.
I LOVE EVERYTHING THAT JONGDAE SAYS IN THIS FIC. Wu Fan lets him struggle for a whole three minutes before he steps in, staunchly not laughing at Jongdae’s mutinous face, omg, this is so great. And your Kris & Chanyeol friendship is SO. AMAZING. Chanyeol surfing the web as Wu Fan looks up scores from NBA games as Wu Fan writes emails to Amber about how much he craves french fries that haven’t been cooked in sesame oil because she totally gets it SERIOUSLY, I CAN PASTE YOU HALF THE FIC WITH HOW MANY TIMES I BROKE OUT IN GLEE. Sigh, too much happiness.
In general, I loved all of Kris's interactions with the rest of his bandmates, because you nail the dynamics so effortlessly. Wu Fan sort of likes that Chanyeol is shameless, though, because in some ways he can live vicariously through him is basically the reason why I love Krisyeol so much, and Kris's wonderful ge-relationship with Tao, like when he takes him out for ice-cream and "You’re still my favorite older brother.", wahhh.
Yixing, who is so capricious even Lu Han doesn’t know what the hell he’ll do or say - this line is such a nice reference to the looks of alarm on Kris and Lu Han's faces whenever Yixing gets the microphone in interviews, haha. And, gosh, my heart at "I just think our fans deserve to like you as much as we do", yes yes DUIZHANG. I like that you gave us such telling glimpses of the pressure that Kris puts on himself to be a good leader but also how his bandmates reassure him in small ways that he's always enough, even as they purposely push his buttons ("I'm constantly dealing with children," // "I had to learn the complaining words first so Junmyeon and I could commiserate" ♥♥).
So many other details that I love - perfect teenager Kai ("Dragons are supposed to be all 'rawr', but you're all 'meow'), Kyungsoo offering Kris shrimp crackers, your absolute perfect Lu Han, ahhhh. I'M SO HAPPY YOU WROTE MORE EXO FIC.
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I LOVE EVERYTHING THAT JONGDAE SAYS IN THIS FIC. Wu Fan lets him struggle for a whole three minutes before he steps in, staunchly not laughing at Jongdae’s mutinous face, omg, this is so great. And your Kris & Chanyeol friendship is SO. AMAZING. Chanyeol surfing the web as Wu Fan looks up scores from NBA games as Wu Fan writes emails to Amber about how much he craves french fries that haven’t been cooked in sesame oil because she totally gets it SERIOUSLY, I CAN PASTE YOU HALF THE FIC WITH HOW MANY TIMES I BROKE OUT IN GLEE. Sigh, too much happiness.
In general, I loved all of Kris's interactions with the rest of his bandmates, because you nail the dynamics so effortlessly. Wu Fan sort of likes that Chanyeol is shameless, though, because in some ways he can live vicariously through him is basically the reason why I love Krisyeol so much, and Kris's wonderful ge-relationship with Tao, like when he takes him out for ice-cream and "You’re still my favorite older brother.", wahhh.
Yixing, who is so capricious even Lu Han doesn’t know what the hell he’ll do or say - this line is such a nice reference to the looks of alarm on Kris and Lu Han's faces whenever Yixing gets the microphone in interviews, haha. And, gosh, my heart at "I just think our fans deserve to like you as much as we do", yes yes DUIZHANG. I like that you gave us such telling glimpses of the pressure that Kris puts on himself to be a good leader but also how his bandmates reassure him in small ways that he's always enough, even as they purposely push his buttons ("I'm constantly dealing with children," // "I had to learn the complaining words first so Junmyeon and I could commiserate" ♥♥).
So many other details that I love - perfect teenager Kai ("Dragons are supposed to be all 'rawr', but you're all 'meow'), Kyungsoo offering Kris shrimp crackers, your absolute perfect Lu Han, ahhhh. I'M SO HAPPY YOU WROTE MORE EXO FIC.