http://sheepsarefluffy.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sheepsarefluffy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] maayacolabackup 2012-06-14 06:44 pm (UTC)

How do you always manage it to make me cry? Let me smash the keyboard to express all my feels >.<
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That's not enough to describe all those feelings you made me feel with this beautiful piece of heavenly fanfiction but I don't want to take up more space with it.

The characterizations (as always) are perfect. And it makes me hate them both for not saying what they really feel until the very last chapter. I just want to hit Jiyong and scream into his ear: JUST TAKE HIM, YOU KNOW YOU WANT IT! Argh. Stupid Jiyong. And Seungri, he doesn't know what to do and ends up telling him exactly the opposite of what he's supposed to do. Why is love so difficult? Correction: Why do people make love seem so difficult when it can be so easy?

From the first sentence on I really enjoyed this fic. When I start reading one of your works there's always this special feeling. I know something bad has happened or will happen, I get exited, wanting to know what exactly it is. But you are the kind of writer that reveals it slowly, first with small hints, later you tell us more. I think that is what makes us readers keep reading, and personally, that is what I enjoy most in your stories. There's this curiosity and nervousness about not knowing what happened.

Mostly, I can often relate to some feelings of both of them. Not wanting to get rejected, being obsessed with somebody or wanting to possess someone even though you know you can't. Not knowing if somebody is in love with you or not, that uncertainty. You can easily express them and your words for all of them are beautiful.

You have to read into Jiyong's actions to really find out his feelings, you don't reveal all of them at once. I like that.

With this fic, it's like looking through Ji's eyes, sometimes rummaging for memories in his brain, but only revealing everything in the end.

I loved this one as much as all of your G-Ri fics, keep uo the good work. Also the fact that there's a bitter aftertaste, even if there's a happy ending. It keeps you thinking.


I'm married to this fic already, but let me marry it again for its awesomeness :D

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