I'm not even sure how I came across this fic any more, but I'm so glad I did! And I don't know where to start, no wait I do. I love your characterization of all the members and how everyone just seems real and genuine with personality!and more than a bit snarky at times. They also didn't feel like they were just thrown in there to move the story along, but were there because they belong there just as much as Baekhyun and Chanyeol do, and but for different circumstances would have been the star of the show. And I love love love how much everyone is into Disney in this because I can so relate, Mulan and Tangled are the best! They totally have impromptu group sing along of 'Be a Man' right? That's not just me right? So of course I thought this entire exchange was brilliance personified: “A dream is a wish your heart makes,” Kai says, and Chanyeol looks at him steadily.
“Did you and Kyungsoo stay up all night watching Disney movies again?” Chanyeol sighs. “I wondered why he didn’t come home. You guys should just live together next year so no one can interrupt your Disney Princess marathons.”
“You sound so judgmental,” Kyungsoo says. “Disney is awesome.”
Let's see what else, oh I thought the way you worked in real life details flowed really well and wasn't awkward, as well as it adding to my enjoyment of the story. The romantic/sexual tension felt just right between Baekhyun and Chanyeol, making me simultaneously want them to get together already and just wanting to savour all the lead up to it, much as I didn't want the fic to end either. And lastly you just made me want a jacket as bitchin' as Baekhyun's. Because I would totally wear it. I am way too fond of loud clothing. I can just see myself wearing it to a fan sign of theirs and Baekhyun being all like I love your jacket! So shiny!And Kai being all disinterested,Whatever, mine's so much better. Anyways hope you write more fics in the Exoverse!
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because I can so relate, Mulan and Tangled are the best! They totally have impromptu group sing along of 'Be a Man' right? That's not just me right?So of course I thought this entire exchange was brilliance personified:“A dream is a wish your heart makes,” Kai says, and Chanyeol looks at him steadily.
“Did you and Kyungsoo stay up all night watching Disney movies again?” Chanyeol sighs. “I wondered why he didn’t come home. You guys should just live together next year so no one can interrupt your Disney Princess marathons.”
“You sound so judgmental,” Kyungsoo says. “Disney is awesome.”
Let's see what else, oh I thought the way you worked in real life details flowed really well and wasn't awkward, as well as it adding to my enjoyment of the story. The romantic/sexual tension felt just right between Baekhyun and Chanyeol, making me simultaneously want them to get together already and just wanting to savour all the lead up to it, much as I didn't want the fic to end either. And lastly you just made me want a jacket as bitchin' as Baekhyun's. Because I would totally wear it. I am way too fond of loud clothing. I can just see myself wearing it to a fan sign of theirs and Baekhyun being all like I love your jacket! So shiny!And Kai being all disinterested,Whatever, mine's so much better.
Anyways hope you write more fics in the Exoverse!