alskdj sob and the beautiful beach scene, baekhyun singing and confiding in chanyeol, i love how naturally you're developing and deepening their friendship, and as already mentioned, how the love just creeps up on us, beyond chanyeol's immediate physical attraction. and his distancing after the beach!! but But he also isn’t, probably, supposed to make his friend feel sad because he can’t control his own feelings. alskdjf god i love how much of this is also just, chanyeol growing up and trying to figure out how to be a responsible person, a considerate adult, how he's barely twenty and aware of when he's being selfish
“Delicious,” he says, voice shaking jesus this whole scene, somehow the finger part took me totally by surprise, it was such a sudden jerk in mood, and gosh, oh my god, sweet baekhyun, clutching the plastic bag as hard as he can, knuckles white. FLUTTERS IN MY STOMACH, SO MANY FLUTTERS ;____; chanyeol having a crisis alone, how they are constantly toeing this line and how baekhyun doesn't want to fuck it up but also can't help his feelings alskfjds BUTTERFLY FLUTTERS EVERYWHERE, and how it's still not perfect after, w/ baekhyun avoiding his eyes , but also the easy way they make up. !!
“Snowing,” he says, HOPEFUL TAO, SO FUCKING CUTE, suho speechless w/ snow, THE SCARF SCENE SOB CHANYEOL HOW CAN YOU BE LIKE THIS ;~;. all the little moments you throw in, like jongin in suho's closet! LEADERLY SUHO :') something I don't give enough credit too/appreciate enough. OH CHANYEOL BEING THE VOICE EVEN THOUGH SUHO IS THE LEADER, i forgot but yes that was perfect
and wow, his voice comes out low, and rough, and Baekhyun visibly shudders THIS WHOLE BEAUTIFUL PART auguhghgughguguggugughdsf how chanyeol just goes by instinct and is just so what he is--someone just coming out of his teens, a young man, a person who shares himself w/ others generously--"he wants to--, he's going to--", and baekhyun still so careful, god adjfadg i have so many feelings, so few words to express them in. and the scene w/ coaxing baekhyun to sing, and baekhyun singing. so lovely ;_;
“Don’t be so nice to me,” Baekhyun says. “It makes me get my hopes up.” akasdf my heart clenched here, it's just. BAEKHYUN ;________; and chanyeol knowing this might be his last chance and still being unable to reach out, and baekhyun's bitterness when he shows up again s o b b i n g fml. FML WHEN THEY FINALLY GET TOGETHER. SO HAPPY and i love that chanyeol's indecision was never stupidly needless or contrived or just a plot device, that it was a legitimate issue for them to work through together, YOU GAVE THEM A REAL RELATIONSHIP, ALL I EVER WANTED ;; and. ofc, the adorably perfect ending. MAYBE IT'S TIME FOR SEHUN TO CONFESS. fucking. sob. ty for this fic <3
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Date: 2012-05-21 11:37 pm (UTC)“Delicious,” he says, voice shaking jesus this whole scene, somehow the finger part took me totally by surprise, it was such a sudden jerk in mood, and gosh, oh my god, sweet baekhyun, clutching the plastic bag as hard as he can, knuckles white. FLUTTERS IN MY STOMACH, SO MANY FLUTTERS ;____; chanyeol having a crisis alone, how they are constantly toeing this line and how baekhyun doesn't want to fuck it up but also can't help his feelings alskfjds BUTTERFLY FLUTTERS EVERYWHERE, and how it's still not perfect after, w/ baekhyun avoiding his eyes , but also the easy way they make up. !!
“Snowing,” he says, HOPEFUL TAO, SO FUCKING CUTE, suho speechless w/ snow, THE SCARF SCENE SOB CHANYEOL HOW CAN YOU BE LIKE THIS ;~;. all the little moments you throw in, like jongin in suho's closet! LEADERLY SUHO :') something I don't give enough credit too/appreciate enough. OH CHANYEOL BEING THE VOICE EVEN THOUGH SUHO IS THE LEADER, i forgot but yes that was perfect
and wow, his voice comes out low, and rough, and Baekhyun visibly shudders THIS WHOLE BEAUTIFUL PART auguhghgughguguggugughdsf how chanyeol just goes by instinct and is just so what he is--someone just coming out of his teens, a young man, a person who shares himself w/ others generously--"he wants to--, he's going to--", and baekhyun still so careful, god adjfadg i have so many feelings, so few words to express them in. and the scene w/ coaxing baekhyun to sing, and baekhyun singing. so lovely ;_;
“Don’t be so nice to me,” Baekhyun says. “It makes me get my hopes up.” akasdf my heart clenched here, it's just. BAEKHYUN ;________; and chanyeol knowing this might be his last chance and still being unable to reach out, and baekhyun's bitterness when he shows up again s o b b i n g fml. FML WHEN THEY FINALLY GET TOGETHER. SO HAPPY and i love that chanyeol's indecision was never stupidly needless or contrived or just a plot device, that it was a legitimate issue for them to work through together, YOU GAVE THEM A REAL RELATIONSHIP, ALL I EVER WANTED ;; and. ofc, the adorably perfect ending. MAYBE IT'S TIME FOR SEHUN TO CONFESS. fucking. sob. ty for this fic <3