I am still in a state of shock knowing that you wrote such a fantastic Ryoda. And.. I don't praise people often. Joo will know. When a story is crap, I don't hesitate to call it so. And this is a masterpiece. It has everything I ever wanted from a Ryoda that is definitely not you hello-stereotypical girly!Ueda and bastard!Ryo. The music stuff that runs through the whole fic gives it an additional layer and I loved that you used music specifically for Ryoda because it's so them . Ryo is always more comfortable, imo, with a guitar in hand than with people in general. Ueda communicates a lot better through his music as well. I loved the banter between the two. It was good banter and I really liked that Ueda fights back.
AND OF COURSE I LOVE YOUR KAME CAMEO.
IS THIS WHAT YOU TRY TO BLURT OUT TO ME THE OTHER DAY? AND SAID THAT YOU COULDN'T SAY. IS THIS? IS THIS? /SHAKES YOU
KAME KAME KAME THE MATCHMAKER. KAME KAME KAME, THIS STORY IS PERFECT BECAUSE I AM A KAMETARD AND KAME KAME KAME BEING ESSENTIAL TO A PLOT MAKES JESSIE VERY VERY VERY HAPPY. PLEASE KEEP WRITING KAME INTO EVERYTHING.
I am gonna re-read this and might add on to this comment later (cough 6am cough) to tell you how much I loved it and WHY. But for now just know you I really loved this okay <3
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Date: 2012-01-01 10:31 pm (UTC)I am still in a state of shock knowing that you wrote such a fantastic Ryoda. And.. I don't praise people often. Joo will know. When a story is crap, I don't hesitate to call it so. And this is a masterpiece. It has everything I ever wanted from a Ryoda that is definitely not you hello-stereotypical girly!Ueda and bastard!Ryo. The music stuff that runs through the whole fic gives it an additional layer and I loved that you used music specifically for Ryoda because it's so them . Ryo is always more comfortable, imo, with a guitar in hand than with people in general. Ueda communicates a lot better through his music as well. I loved the banter between the two. It was good banter and I really liked that Ueda fights back.
AND OF COURSE I LOVE YOUR KAME CAMEO.
IS THIS WHAT YOU TRY TO BLURT OUT TO ME THE OTHER DAY? AND SAID THAT YOU COULDN'T SAY. IS THIS? IS THIS? /SHAKES YOU
KAME KAME KAME THE MATCHMAKER. KAME KAME KAME, THIS STORY IS PERFECT BECAUSE I AM A KAMETARD AND KAME KAME KAME BEING ESSENTIAL TO A PLOT MAKES JESSIE VERY VERY VERY HAPPY. PLEASE KEEP WRITING KAME INTO EVERYTHING.
I am gonna re-read this and might add on to this comment later (cough 6am cough) to tell you how much I loved it and WHY. But for now just know you I really loved this okay <3